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Yuki4ver
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Deci,despre ce e vb in acest topic:atashi,adik yo,pretty_kagome voi face aici mai multe mini stories-uri,deci voi posta cand voi avea timp povesti mini povesti scrise de mn,evident shi sa stiti k asta prima kre o voi pune akm am scris-o in timpul unei ore,eram sad,trista shi mi-a venit asa sa scriu.sper sa va placa.astept comentarii,critici,indiferent kat de dure sunt shi va rog fara spam.ja ne

Visul

Mergea neincetat pe iarba de-un verde stralucit,frageda si acoperita de o perdea de apa.Afara ploua,soarele posomorat intrand in norii grei si intunecosi.Soarele disparuse,in urma cu doar cateva minute,desi nu dadea semne cerul ca avea sa fie acoperit.
Era imbracata intr-o rochita cu bretelute,alba,cusuta pe margini cu floricele colorate,parul de-un blond natural,stralucitor si lung era despletit,doar cateva suvite erau prinse cu o clama pe o parte.
Mergea,dar nu stia incotro se indrepta,dar avea sentimentul ca trebuia sa mearga neincetat,fara sa se uite inapoi.In cele din urma,ajunse la capatul drumului si se opri.Se uita in jos:era o groapa adanca,aparent fara fund,infundata de intuneric.
Se indeparta putin.Cerul devenise mai intunecat.Se auzeau tunetele,insotite de fulgere.Deodata,pamantul incepu sa se miste,crapandu-se,o parte din el cazand in groapa de care ei ii era frica.
Cazu in genunchi.Incepu sa planga si isi puse mainile la urechi.Nu stia ce sa faca, ii era putin frica si putin frig,deoarece vantul batea tare,frunzele din copac cazand pe jos.
In fata ei aparu un baiat,pe care ea il considera,la inceput,un inger.Era brunet,ochii verzi,putin mai inalt decat ea , imbracat cu o mantie lunga si neagra.O ajuta sa se ridice.Se uita in ochii ei speriati,stergandu-i lacrimile de pe chipul ei nevinovat:
-Cine esti?!ii spuse ea.
Baiatul nu zise nimic.Ii desprinse clama,suvitele rebele acoperindu-i putin fata.Se uita adanc in ochii ei si o imbratisa puternic.Ea nu stia ce sa zica si nici ce sa faca,dar acel sentiment pe care il avea la inceput se opri atunci cand il intalni pe acest baiat.Zambi si ea,luandu-l in brate.Nu vroia sa se mai desprinda de el.
Se uita iar la ea,fizandu-o cu privirea.Ii dadu cateva suvite la o parte si o saruta.Pentru ea,era primul sarut:nu fusese sarutata inainte.Fiorii ii invadasera corpul si simtea fluturi in stomac.O lacrima ii cazu pe obrazul drept.Nu vroia sa se termine acel sarut,nu vroia sa-l lase sa plece.Vroia sa opreasca timpul si sa ramana asa,dar nu era posibil.
Un fulger puternic,urmat de un tunet ingrozitor ii intrerupse pe cei 2.Baiatul se opri,desi nici el nu vroia sa se opreasca.Zambi diabolic,impingandu-o pe fata.Pe spate ii aparura aripi mari si negre,parul scurt devenise putin mai lung,iar ochii verzi devenisera negrii.Fata se sperie.Baiatul se apropie de ea,aceasta ducandu-se cu spatele,fara sa vada pe unde mergea.Ajunse aproape de groapa.Se uita in jos.Ii era frica.Incepu sa planga.
-De ce?!ii spuse ea,cu lacrimi in ochi.
Baiatul nu spuse nimic,nici de data aceasta.Zambi iar,dar mai diabolic decat inainte.Isi intinse mainile,impingandu-o pe fata in groapa de care ii era teama.O impinse,aruncand peste ea petalele unui fir de trandafir rosu si plin cu tepi.
-Nu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Speriata si transpirata,se sterse la ochi.Era in pat,invelita cu plapumioara calduroasa si pufoasa.Era in camera ei,acasa.Aprinse veioza.Se uita la ceas:era ora 1 noaptea.Afara se auzeau tunetele si stropii de ploaie ce atingeau geamul.Tuna,flugera-ploaua.Fusese un vis,doar un vis,dar ei i se paru real,mai ales sarutul.Lasa capul in jos,ochii marindui-se:erau petalele de trandafir.Nu-i venea sa creada.Era un vis,dar totusi real.......................................................

The End

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O iubire imposibila,dar de neuitat..........................

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~ My little story about Christmas !

Iarna,fiica cea mai frumoasa si rece a anului a sosit!Desi este inceputul lunii decembrie,iarna cerne norii,acpoerind pamantul inghetat cu o mantie alba stralucitoare.Fulgii mari ca de vata asemeni unor fluturi lucitori gatesc pamantul.A venit iarna,dar nu si vacanta pentru elevii de la liceul unde Higurashi Kagome invata sau cel putin asa pare:
-Daca m=n,A se numeste matrice patratica sau matrice patratica de ordinul n;multimea acestor matrice se ............... zicea profesorul de matematica,in timp ce scria la tabla.
-Kagome-chan!Kagome-chan!Kagome-chan!zicea Eri,incercand sa o trezeasca pe Kagome.
-Nicio sansa,Eri-san!zise Yuka.
-Kagome-chan!zise Eri,dar ....................
Profesorul se intoarse incruntat si inchise manualul de matematica.Se indrepta spre fete:
-Ce se intampla aici?!
-Eto.........
-Higurashi!Higurashi!Higurashi!!!!!
Se trezi in cele din urma.
-Hai!zise Kagome ridicandu-se in picioare.
-Stiu ca ai probleme de sanatate,dar vin examenele si te rog sa fi mai atenta la ora mea................
Clopotelul suna.Ca pedeapsa,Kagome trebuia sa faca teme suplimentare legate de lectia noua.Orele se terminara ................ In drum spre casa:
-De cand ai revenit la scoala,te comporti ciudat.Te simti bine?!zise Yuka.
-Te-ai certat cu iubitul?!intreba Eri.
-Eto........ nu am nimic,fetelor.Ma simt bine!incerca Kagome sa ascunda.
Dupa 15 minute,Kagome ajunse,in cele din urma,acasa,desi era aglomeratie in centru.Isi saluta familia,urca in camera ei,spunandu-i mamei ca nu-i e foame.Isi tranti ghiozdanul pe jos,se dezbraca,infasurandu-se cu un prosop roz si pufos,isi desfacu parul si se duse in baie:umplu cada cu apa fierbinte:intra in cada:se aseza cu mainile pe marginea cazii,cufundandu-se in ganduri:
-Baka!Baka!Inuyasha no Baka!isi spuse in gand,lacrimile acoperindu-i ( invadandu-i) fata:

~ Flashback ~

Dupa ce se luptara cu un paianjen-demon,cei 5 recuperasera 2 bucati din giuvaierul Shikon.Aveau doar un sfert din toata bijuteria,jumatate fiind in posesia lui Naraku.Ajunsera seara in satul lui Kaede:
-Am mai gasit 2 bucati azi!zise Miroku.
-Bravo,minna!zise multumita Kagome.
-Keh!Maine vom merge dupa celelalte!zise Inuyasha.
-Inuyasha,poti sa iei o pauza!zise Kagome.
-O sa le recuperam!zise Sango.
-Voi pune mana pe Naraku,voi recupera si voi intregi giuvaierul si voi deveni youkai!zise Inuyasha.
-Si ce vei face dupa aia?!zise Kagome,putin nervoasa.
-Na ni?!Ce voi face dupa?!Eto...... nu stiu........ poate ........
- ............ te vei intoarce la ea,nu?!
-Cine?!Ah .......Kikyou ...... desigur ........ adica nu......... adica da ..........Da' ce te intereseaza?!
-Deviere de la subiect!zise Shippo,desenand.
Kagome si Inuyasha se ridicara in picioare nervosi,certandu-se,iar ceilalti nu stiau ce sa faca:
-De ce sa nu ma intereseze?!Tot timpul ....... Kikyo,Kikyo,Kikyo !
-Daca eu ma gandesc la ea,atunci tu la ....... Kouga!
-Kouga-kun?!E de o mie de ori mai bun!
-Na ni?!
-Iarasi se cearta pe tema asta!zise Shippo desenand in continuare.
-Numai la giuvaier si Kikyo.Altceva nu-ti trece prin capul ala?!
-Da' de unde stii tu ......
-N-ar fi mai bine sa va calmati?!zise Miroku calm.
-Nu!exclamara amandoi la el.
-Kouga-n sus si-n jos.Eu am un scop.Tu nu ai!zise Inuyasha.
Kagome se infurie.Ceilalti stiau k nu era de bine ce urma:
-Inuyasha!Osuwari!!!Osuwari!!Osuwari!Osuwari!!!!!!
Inuyasha facuse un crater adanc.Kagome isi lua ghiozdanul si pleca:
-Cu siguranta e cel mai puternic osuwari al ei!zise Shippo speriat.
-De acord!zisera Sango si Miroku.
Kagome arunca giuvaierul in mainile lui Shippo,lunadu-si la revedere.......................

~ End of Flashback ~

Zilele trecura repede,iar vacanta batu la usa:fara scoala!fara teme!vacanta a sosit,ceea ce insemna mult timp,distractie si multe cadouri ca doar venea Craciunul peste 2 zile,nu?!
Ningea ca-n povesti.Ningea neincetat,ziceai ca era o cununa de stelute argintii ce acopereau pamantul cu covoare albe si moi.La Mall,intr-o cafenea,Kagome si fetele faceau o pauza,dupa cumparaturile de Craciun:
-A trecut o saptamana!Nu va mai veni!Nici nu-l intereseaza!Nici pe mine!Are giuvaierul,o are pe Kikyo,sa se descurce!isi spunea in gand Kagome.
-Kagome,tu ce vrei de Craciun?!intreba Ayumi.
-Eu?!Nimic. ....... nu va fi posibil ...............
-Ce sa fie?!zise Yuka.
-Nimic.Ce le-ati luat famililor voastre?!zise Kagome,schimband subiectul.
-Ah!Eu i-am luat un glob de cristal si ......
-Higurashi!
-Hojo-kun!zisera fetele toate.Konnichi wa!
-Buna!Ce faceti?!
-Pe aici si noi.ne pregatim de Craciun.Tu?!
-Bine.La fel.Nu stiu ce sa-i cumpar mamei si v-am vazut si .........
-Desigur k Kagome-chan te va insoti!zise Eri.
-Atashi?!
-Multumesc!Ja ne!
Hojo o lua pe Kagome(nu era multumita) de mana si cutreierara magazinele 2 ore.Hojo o conduse pe Kagome acasa.Urmatoarea zi fu extrem de obositoare pentru Kagome:o ajutase pe mama ei cu curatenia in casa,facusera cumparaturile;isi ajutase mama cu pregatirile pentru masa de Craciun.Seara,Kagome se culca devreme cu hainele pe ea,fara sa se mai schimbe.Mama ei zambi si o acoperi cu patura,inchinzandu-i geamul intredeschis.
Venise si Craciunul!Afara era si mai frumos:ningea si mai tare.Crengiile copacilor de zahar erau gatite cu beteala.In casa familiei Higurashi nu era asa mare galagie sau ......
-De ce azi?!zise Kagome nervoasa,imbracata in haine de miko.
-Asa trebuie:va aduce noroc daca tinem o ceremonie inainte de masa de Craciun!zise bunicul,punandu-i numai lanticuri si matanii lui Kagome.
Souta chicotea,in timp ce se juca cu Buyo,iar mama lor pregatea masa mai zambitoare ca niciodata:
-Kagome?!
-Da,mama?!
-Crezi in dragoste la prima vedere?!
-De ce ma intrebi?!
-Am visat ceva ............. frumos!
-Frumos?!zise Kagome uimita,bunicul luandu-o si ducandu-o spre templul mic din curte.
Souta si mama ii insotira:Si astfel incepu ceremonia(ma rog):betisoare parfumate aprinse in fata unui altar si toate cele specifice ceremoniei.Bunicul zicea tot felul de rugaciuni,iar Kagome si Souta ajutau la ritual.
Dupa 25 minute,Kagome se saturase:isi dadu toate mataniile jos si pleca din incapere,in ciuda faptului ca bunicul o striga,Souta era uimit,iar mama zambea:
-kagome,nu face bine sa pleci acum!
-Nu ma intereseaza,bunicule!Ma duc afara,sa iau aer!
-Kagome,sunt mandra de tine!isi spuse in gand mama.
Kagome iesise,inchinzand dusile de lemn dupa ea.Afara ningea asa de frumos,de nici nu-ti venea sa intri in casa,chiar daca era frig.Merse,lasand in urma pasii de la papucii ei maro.Nu avea nicio geaca pe ea,ci doar hainele de miko.Fulgii de zapada ii acopereau usor parul negru desprins.Ajunse in fata Copacului Sacru,vroia sa plece,dar parca o voce ii spunea sa stea.Se opri si se uita la GoShinBoku.Amintirile ii veneau treptat in minte,de cand l-a cunoscut pe Inuyasha.Toate s-au intamplat datorita Copacului Sacru,dar mai ales Bone Eater's Well.
-Aici l-am cunoscut pe ........... Inuyasha si de atunci,am tinut-o numai in belele.........in cautarea lui Naraku si intregirea giuvaierului Shikon.........bune si rele,bucuri si neplaceri,fericire si tristete ........ Inuyasha!isi spuse Kagome,in soapta,aproape plangand si cazand in genunchi.
Se ridica,se sterse putin la ochi si zise tare:
-Baka!Baka!Baka!Inuyasha no Baka!Tu iubesti pe altcineva,dar ......... eu.......... eu ...........te ........... te iubesc!Inuyasha,te iubesc mai mult decat oricine!!!!!!
Kagome se sperie:simti o usoara adiere calda la ceafa,cineva atingandu-o incet de maini si luandu-o in brate usor.Era putin speriata,fiori cuprinzandu-i usor corpul.Se intoarse putin:
-Inuyasha?!zise ea incremenita si rosindu-se ca racul.
-Kagome!zise Inuyasha,strangandu-o puternic in brate.
Acest moment dura doar cateva secunde:Kagome se trezi,desprinzandu-se si intorcandu-se cu fata la el:
-Ce cauti aici?!
-Am venit ....... sa-ti spun ....... si sa-ti dau ceva!zise Inuyasha apropiindu-se de ea incet.
-Nu stiu ce vrei de la mine,dar ..... eu nu am sa-ti spun nimic!zise Kagome indepartandu-se incat ajunse sa se lipeasca de trunchiul Copacului Sacru.
-Chiar nu ai sa-mi spui ...... nimic?!zise Inuyasha mai serios.
Kagome rosi rau de tot.Nu stia ce sa zica sau ce sa faca.Inuyasha ajunse sa fie aproape de ee,de hainele ei.Simti parfumul ei.O lua in brate si o stranse puternic.
-Inuyasha!Ne pot vedea parinti si nu as vrea sa ........
Vroia sa continue,dar Inuyasha puse mainile pe parul ei,facandu-i semne sa taca si o ............saruta.Kagome parea ca vroia sa respinga,dar pentru ca il iubea enorm de mult,ceda.Kagome incepu sa planga de fericire,fulgii de zapada acoperindu-i pe cei 2.Familia ei iesi,in cele din urma,ii vazu,dar mama zise:
-Craciun fericit!zise aceasta aruncand cu paiete pe sus.
Kagome ii vazu,rosi,dar Inuyasha o lua in brate si o saruta iar:
-Kagome ....... tu esti totul pentru mine!De cand te-am vazut,m-ai fermecat,desi ne-am certat de atatea ori,dar am...... realizat.....ca nu pot trai fara tine si........ ca ......te iubesc!isi spuse in gand Inuyasha.
-E cel mai frumos cadou pe care l-am primit de Craciun.Cel mai frumos.....baiatul pe care eu.....l-am iubit......si pe care il voi iubi mereu .........Inuyasha,te iubesc!isi zise in gand Kagome.
Dupa 10 minute:
-Kagome,iarta-ma ca m-am purtat asa urat.Eu te iubesc!
-Eu te rog sa ma ierti!Parca am fost un copil mic.Te iubesc!Craciun fericit,Inuyasha!
-Craciun fericit,Kagome.
O stranse puternic si o saruta:
-Tinerii astia!zise bunicul.
-Exact ca in visul meu!zise in gand mama.

~ The End ~

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Time is passing by, so am I ...

Luv ya, Wu Chun ^_^
U are the best !!!!!!

FahRenHeit fan 4 ever ....

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Angel_Nyu
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e prea romantic.... mai era un pic shi plingeam. povestioara ta park mi-a incalzit sufletul. vei scrie continuarea, nu?

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Yuki4ver
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da nu are continuare povestea asta
sunt scurte povesti,nu romane,mici nuvele sa zik asa :P
o sa vin soon cu alta k nu am timp sa scriu akm

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Time is passing by, so am I ...

Luv ya, Wu Chun ^_^
U are the best !!!!!!

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Angel_Nyu
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pacat

. ash fi vrut sa continui, dar nui nik
abia ashtept urmatoarea povestioara

=D

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Crissy92
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ce faina a fost prima povestire, Visul!!!....

... tine-o tot asa.

mi-a placut si aia cu inuyasha... desi e cam greu sa cred ca inuyasha a chiar sarutat-o pe kagome....oricum, draguta poveste...

own little stories ^_^ faina fost prima povestire, tine-o tot asa. mi-a placut aia desi cam greu

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Ice Wolf
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ce super!sper sa continui cat mai repede pentru ca imi place la nebunie.

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Yuki4ver
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o sa mai postez una scurta despre o tipa kre spera ceva .........
anyway e lunga, deci o voi posta in weekend, cred sau maine

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Ice Wolf
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in weekend abia?bine,bine nam nimica in potriva dar as vrea sa fie mai devreme continuarea dar asta e.eu iti spun sa o tii tot asa si sper sa fie un capitol super tare.

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Yuki4ver
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Am mai scris mici povestioare funny si full of love si soon le voi posta, in functie de timp k am d invatat pt skl si recapitulare bac :|

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Yuki4ver
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A new story 4 a friend who isn't so happy today. But I hope she will be or at least she will smile. Kisses Cristina .....

Data : 29.10.2007
About : a boy who meets his true love, a girl from the sky
Title : O stea cazatoare

- Seara, noaptea este momentul cel mai potrivit in care se pot intampla multe, in care o dorinta ti se poate indeplini atunci cand vezi o ploaie de stele, o stea cazatoare : asta auzeam mereu cand eram mic. Mama imi spunea mereu acelasi lucru, pana la varsta de 10 ani, cand ea s-a stins din viata si nu am mai crezut in nimeni si nimic. De atunci eu nu mai cred astfel de povesti, nu mai cred pentu simplul fapt ca nu exista : dorintele cele mai ascunse in inima unui om nu vor deveni niciodata realitate …
Era inceputul iernii : fulgii mari asemeni unor fluturi lucitori se asterne pe pamant asemeni unor covoare albe si moi printr-o cununa de stelute argintii. Ningea de cateva zile, aproape fara oprire. Ma indreptam spre scoala, imbracat cu o jacheta groasa si scurta, aveam manusi si caciula pe care mama mi le-a facut inainte sa moara. Mergeam pe acelasi drum, pe o scurtatura, printr-un parc pe care rar oamenii il vizitau. Indreptandu-ma spre scoala, in parc, am vazut o sclipire. M-am oprit si m-am uitat spre cer : ningea mai mult/mai rau decat inainte, ningea ca-n povesti. Am zambit, in sinea mea si mi-am vazut de drum. Am mers cativa metri pana ce-am observat aceeasi sclipire venita din tufisuri. M-am dus sa vad despre ce e vorba si cand am ajuns, am vazut-o : pe o banca, ascunsa intre tufisuri statea o fata, extrem de frumoasa, blonda cu parul lung, o fata inocenta, imbracata intr-o rochita fara maneci frumoasa alba si pe deasupra un palton cu accesori din gheata. Pe cap avea o caciula alba din matase si purta cizmulite pana la genunchi albe pe margini cu gheata. M-am apropiat de ea si i-am vazut chipul senin si cald, desi afara era un ger cumplit. Am vrut sa o ating, dar s-a trezit brusc, s-a speriat, ne-am ciocnit unul de altul si a cazut pe mine, iar eu pe pamantul inghetat acoperit de zapada.
- Imi pare rau …. eu nu am vrut sa te trezesc si …. eh?! spusesem eu uimit cand am vazut-o apropiindu-se din ce in ce mai mult de mine incat ma rosisem ca o fetita timida …. Am spus ceva rau?! Am facut ceva rau?!
- Unde si in ce an suntem?! spuse privind in jur, dupa cateva minute ridicandu-se …..
M-am ridicat, m-am scuturat de zapada si m-am uitat mirat la ea. Fata se apropie de mine :
- Ei bine?!
- Anul 2008 …. Tokyo.
- Tokyo, 2008?! Am venit prea devreme! Fir-ar …..
- Prea devreme?! Devreme pentru ce ….
- Devreme pentru …. asta! Dar …. deh! Se mai intampla!
Se apropie, aproape lipindu-se de mine, se ridica putin si ma saruta. Ii simteam buzele moi si in acelasi timp reci. Eram uimit. A stat asa timp de cateva minute pana ce-am indepartat-o usor de mine ….
- Ce crezi ca faci?!
- Nimic. Indeplinesc o dorinta a unei persoane dragi tie. Ai grija de tine! Pe curand!
- Ce?! Stai …..
Am vrut sa o apuc de mana, dar disparuse sub ochii mei. Disparuse fara urme si fara a da explicatii. Ma uitam mirat si in locul in care se aflase ea era o cununa de stelute argintii …. si un fulg de gheata mai mare. L-am luat in mana si m-am uitat spre cer. Era o ploaie de stele, moment in care am vazut o stea, o stea cazatoare parca destinata mie, facandu-ma sa-mi dau seama ca dorintele pot deveni realitate …………..

Baiatul e el :

Ea e fata :

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Mmmmm ce trist dar frumos si vesel . Ma bucur ca sa terminat cu bine , si eu cred ca stiu acui a fos dorinta :a mamei lui . F frumos sper sa mai pui in curand !

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în mai bat clopotele morţii
frunze se coboară din copacul vieţii
rând pe rând se mai aprinde-o lumânare...
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în mai bat clopotele morţii -
"rugaţi-vă să nu vă crească aripi" -
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buna...pt k miai dedicat mie poezia in mod special si pt k am vz k e superba am hotarat sa ma inregistrez pe forumul tau pure4ever..pt ati multumi k ai incercat sa ma inveselesti pt toate sfaturile bune care mi le-ai dat..

..ms mooooooolt:*:*:*..app forumul e misto..i like it..

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Well, nu a iesit asa cum am vrut, dar mai o groaza si mi-e lene putin s l l transciru dar poate imi fac timp[ si transcriu si cap noi d l cele 2 povesti publicate k am multe teme si recapitulari pt bac si timp putin ^^
Oricum va multumesc pt pareri ^^

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Yuki4ver
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Data : 18.11.2007
About : Daisuke Niwa & Riku Harada from Dn Angel
Title : Close to you, my love ……

First of all, I would like to say that I’m reading fan fic’s from here, especially Dn Angel and Gakuen Alice and some of them are my favourites . Second of all , this is my first story written in english so please excuse me from the mistakes that you will see. I’m sad and when I’m sad I write stories in my language ( romanian ) and listening sad songs. Now I’m listening Close to you – Dj Aligator feat Heidi and Cry – Rihanna . Arigato gozaimasu ^_^
Btw, I do not own Dn Angel ……

Winter, probably the most beautiful and coldest season of the year, had sift the clouds, the big flakes alike sliver stars had spread on the cold and frozen land alike a white and softly carpet : it’s snowing as in the stories .....

If the waves of live
Will strike against you merciless
Be strong like a rock
For the wave is passer-by …

- One flake, two flakes, three flakes, four flakes, lots of flakes … winter should be a season of having fun with the others and not staying in the house like me … What am I talking about?! I’m just stupid of thinking that could be possible to have a relationship with … him! were the thoughts of Riku Harada who was watching the snow fall from the ( window ) frame .
She was wearing a pink and soft pullover, a black skirt and some funny slippers. She is kind, caring, very outspoken and selfless, wanting the best for everyone and to help those in need, but … what about the best for her?! The sadness and doubt sets mastery on her soul, making her doubting of what she feels, of her feelings for … Daisuke Niwa …
- He said it on the beach, when he hugged me … he said that his feelings weren’t for Risa-chan , his feelings were for me … He was lying ?! Why ?! Just to make me confess that I love him ?! Still … even if my heart is broken, I’m upset and crying … I can’t believe that … he is Dark ?! Dark Mousy, the Legendary Phantom Thief … the pervert who stealed my first kiss?! Niwa-kun is … Dark ?! Why didn’t he told me from the beginning?! Why did he had to hide the truth from me ?! were the thoughts of Riku who began to cry, letting her hand to fall slowly on the cold window, almost frozen ….
She put her slippers in her feet, breathed freely and went to her balcony covered with a radiant white carpet : it was a terrible frost, the snow was brilliant and the sea was restless, the water from the coast was almost ice. She was watching the snow falling when she saw a dark point and surprising the point from the sky was nonother than Dark. She was almost at the door of her balcony when Dark get down, putting himself in front of the door, having in his hand another stolen artifact .
- What do you want ?! said Riku with her look towards the sea.
- C’mon, you don’t have to be so cold to me, the man that kissed you a longtime ago, here. Don’t you remember ?!
- Shut up, ok ?! Get out of here! said Riku with her eyes closed and almost with tears.
She approached the railing when Dark appeared in front of her, seizing of her hands. Riku had the look towards the sea when Dark began to speak to her with a serious look :
- If it was after me, I wouldn’t be here and talking with you, but … the kid hasn’t spooken since you two argued and he doesn’t care of what might happen to him or what do I do with his body … his family is worried, his friends are worried, everybody is worried so … if you truly love him, go to the ball and talk with him, because he will be there, waiting for you ….
- Dark ! Let her go ! I won’t go to that stupid ball! said Daisuke sadly.
- Daisuke, shut up! said Dark serious.
Riku was watching the sea with her eyes closed and almost with tears. She didn’t said a word. Dark let her go, before leaving , he said to her that she doesn’t know what she’s missing. It was still snowing when Riku falled on the cold cement and began to cry , putting her hands on her face ….

My mind is gone
I’m spinning round
And deep inside
My tears I’ll drown
I’m loosing grip
What’s happening?
I stray from love
This is how I feel ….

- Why me ?! Why is always has to be me ?! If I don’t love him so much, why am I crying ?! Why my heart is sad and my head hurts ?! said in her mind when she remembered what Dark said …

“ If you truly love him, go to the ball and talk with him, because he will be there, waiting for you … “

This time was different
Felt like I was just a victim
And it cut me like a knife
When you walked out of my life
Now I’m in this condition
And I got all the symptoms
Of a girl with a broken heart
But no matter what
You’ll never see me cry ….

- I don’t know how I feel, if my feelings for him had changed, I don’t know if I listen my mind or my heart, because both of them want something different …. Niwa-kun … I’m not sure …
The younger, more naive of the Harada twins and innocent girl, Risa entered in Riku’s room and was worried when she saw her on the balcony, covered with snow. She took a long black pullover and run to her, putting the pullover on her shoulders.
- One-chan, what are you doing here, covered with snow and with tears on your face?! Why are you crying?! Are you feeling bad?! Should I call a doctor?! I’ll go and call for …
- I don’t need a doctor! Nobody can help me … I’m lost in the darkness of a lost world ! There is no hope …
- Riku-chan …
Risa had a serious look when she pulled Riku from the cement and entered the room. Riku falled in the soft and warm bed and Risa sat on the edge of the bed with a soft towel giving to Riku to dry her hair and face ( to wipe, the sense ). Riku began to cry and puts her head on the knees of her sister, Risa who smilled gentl y.
- You’re sad because of Niwa-kun, am I right?!
- How do you know?!
- I don’t have to know that my sister is sad, because your heart and mine are one and when you are sad I can feel it the same way when my heart is sad and you can sense it.
-Risa-chan , I ….
- Sss … you don’t have to say the reason you are sad because I don’t want to know, I don’t want to hear it … I just want to say that your heart or your mind wants something different, you should choose what your heart sais …
- Risa-chan , I …
- I know you will choose the right way and you will face the truth, that you wil be strong like a rock because you were striked by the waves of life …
Riku watched through ( into ) Risa’s eyes with her eyes full of tears, thinking at the moments from where she meat Daisuke Niwa, the moment when she realized that she loved him even if she didn’t knew that he was Dark, the moment on the beach when he hugged her … time is passing by … It was like a fiery bulb ( a light, a sign ) when she realized what her heart said …
- I must go to that ball, I must talk to him before it’s too late …
- It’s never too late …
- But … I don’t know what to wear and my eyes are highflonens ( swollens ) because I cried and ….
- Leave those to me! said with a smile Risa.
Riku let herself on the hands of Risa : she put her to take a shower, she gived her a sweet and wonderful dress, like a princess, she arranged her hair and make her up. After an hour, in front of Harada’s house : the car was waiting for the girls to go out ( of doors ) when Risa opened the door :
- May I present you the sweetest girl from the ball, Riku Harada ….
Riku lower down the stairs and entered in the car with Ris a, who had a beautiful dress as well, the car pointing ( straightening, going ) to the ball .

It’s getting harder to ignore
It’s not like anything before
I know it’s crazy baby but I want more …

A 14 year-old-boy, dressed with a dark costume was standing leaned on the wall when his friend, Takeshi approached him with a glass in his hand …
- Why don’t you hang out with the others?!
- Because I’m not in the good mood. I didn’t want to come here …
- What’s wrong?!
- Everything is wrong because … forget it! I’m going on the balcony! I need air!
Daisuke went on the balcony covered with snow. It was snowing. Dark sensed it and tried to talk to him .
- C’mon, you have a lot of cute girls here You can forget about her …
- I don’t want to forget her because … I love her …
- Then you are a fool because you haven’t spooke with her since that day.
- She doesn’t want to see me and I don’t want to force her. I’ll always love Riku-chan!
- And what about now?! Do you still love her?! said a voice who entered on the balcony.
Daisuke turned and he was surprised to see Riku, almost shy when he saw her with the beautiful dress and the snow, the flakes covering her. She made slowly steps approaching to him …
- Riku-chan, what are you doing here?! I thought that you wouldn’t see me again.
- Well, let’s say I was thinking all this time and made my decision! said still approaching.
- Your decision?!
- Yes. I’m sorry for making you sad, I’m sorry for the way I treated you, I don’t care if Dark is you …
- C’mon! said Dark.
- …. but I know one thing : that I loved you from the beginning and I’ll always love you, Daisuke Niwa no matter what might happen to me …
- Riku-chan, I …

I can sense the chemistry
When you are standing close to me
I feel like a ship that’s lost at sea

- I can’t ignore what my heart sais, I don’t care that my mind is wrong, I love you, Daisuke Niwa! said Riku in front of him raising a little to be close to his face …

I wish I could be close to you
To feel your every touch
Cause the sky won’t heal the way I feel
Heaven knows I’ve wanted it so much
Wanted it so much
Wanted it so much

Daisuke taked her in his arms softly ( gently ), watching in her sincerely eyes, breathed freely and then he touched gently her lips, giving her a softly kiss, having her in his arms. It was snowing more and more, in her mind ….
- I’ll always love you, Daisuke Niwa, no matter what will happen ….

The childhood is like a flower
The youth is like a dream
The friendship is like the Sun
The love is like a paradise …

Arigato gozaimasu ^_^ 4 reading my little story about my favourite couple, Daisuke-kun and Riku-chan. I’m sorry again for the mistakes, I’ll hope I’ll not make another. I would like to hear your opinions since you’ve read it so I can make it better next time. Thanks again and have a nice day ^_^

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Tre sa o zic , stiu engleza ...insa mi-am facut curaj sa o citesc ! E foarte frumoasa si cred eu ca tre sa ai multa rabdare sa scrii asa ceva in engleza , linba nefiind a ta de origine. Ti-a iesit super si mi-a placut cand i-a spus ca o va iubi mereu orice sar intanpla

ROMANTIC!!!!

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